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My utopia will include natural resources for citizens to enjoy. My utopia will include parks and lakes for citizens to enjoy. Citizens will take care of these natural resources, which will make the community stronger. Which revision of the underlined sentence provides the most variety to the structure of the paragraph? a. My utopia will include resources like parks and lakes. b. My utopia will include lakes and parks for citizens. c. For example, parks and lakes will be available for the community. d. For example, my utopia will include natural resources for citizens.

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After looking both on the sentences given above and the options, without ay doubts I can say that the revision of the underlined sentence which provides the most variety to the structure of the paragraph is : c. For example, parks and lakes will be available for the community. I choose this one because due to some essay organization rules, there is no need to repeat ''My utopia'' a lot of times. 

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